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Tears are falling down my face,
Picking up an all-time pace.
Staining and streaking my rosey cheeks,
Leaving perfect mascara streaks.

No one gets this pain I feel,
No one gets how this loneliness is so real.
I'm feeling lost, and nowhere to be found.
I'm running in circles, round and round.

I feel detached and out of touch,
I feel as hopeless as such.
I crawl into my empty bed,
Just to rest my weary head.

Close my eyes, and hope for sleep,
Into the night, my soul does weep.
My heart stays empty, and very cold,
To only me, are my secrets told.
©2005-2009 ~JustAnEmptySoul
:iconjustanemptysoul:

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um...yeah...kind of feeling this way...comments please.

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:iconpsobloke:
Aww.. I hate to imagine you this way (Its the crying.. I just don't like the idea of you crying, tears dont deserve to be on your face, you're too amazing and nice and everthing!) But I love your emotional writing pieces, they're always extremely well written and this is just that =)

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- PsoBloke (John)
Check out Everything Sucks to find out why they rock so hard.
:iconxinfinitedelusionx:
Aww hun, it's a beautifully written poem but I'm sorry that you're feeling this way :hug:

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They've clipped my wings again, tore them apart and then, left me.
No use to fly away, to my yesterday, of freedom.
My eyes died back that day, seeing the hurt I may have done.
Beat me instead of them, pain is my only zen, of fun.
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:iconjustanemptysoul:
thanks...it's alright, i'm practically used to it. :hug: back

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~*Dana*~

Anthony and Dana--December 1, 2007
"I'll stop the world and melt with you"
:iconjustanemptysoul:
yeah, i know you feel that way...you've told me before :hug: thanks that means a lot. :)

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~*Dana*~

Anthony and Dana--December 1, 2007
"I'll stop the world and melt with you"
:iconpsobloke:
Aww.. I know I've said it before and i'll say it over and over again because you're so awesome and you deserve happiness! :hug: =)

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- PsoBloke (John)
Check out Everything Sucks to find out why they rock so hard.
:icondeadinside28713:
this is wonderful babes

--
Josie

¤You cant change who people are without destroying who they were¤

I'm not like them, but I can pretend.

& you bleed just to know you're alive
:iconjustanemptysoul:
aww, :) :hug: back

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~*Dana*~

Anthony and Dana--December 1, 2007
"I'll stop the world and melt with you"
:iconjustanemptysoul:
thanks hon.

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~*Dana*~

Anthony and Dana--December 1, 2007
"I'll stop the world and melt with you"
:iconxinfinitedelusionx:
Ok, as long as you're ok then :hug:

--
They've clipped my wings again, tore them apart and then, left me.
No use to fly away, to my yesterday, of freedom.
My eyes died back that day, seeing the hurt I may have done.
Beat me instead of them, pain is my only zen, of fun.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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