The rain pelts against the window,
and I think of you lieing in your bed.
I wonder if you're thinking of me,
As I lay with thoughts of you in my head.
I pull the covers up to my chin,
And roll onto my side.
A tear rolls slowly down my cheek,
As the rest I try to hide.
My heart is so heavy,
It feels worn and stress galore.
My mind is torn and tired,
It just can't take anymore.
You seem to make me laugh,
And you can make me smile.
Whenever I am with you,
My heart can fly for miles.
You hold me by the waist,
And you take me by the hand,
You kiss me on my forehead,
Whatever cute physical thing you can.
I wish you could hold me,
While I cry here in my bed,
I long to tell you everything,
And all the secrets in my head.













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With worn and stress galore.
My mind is torn and tired,
It just can't take anymore."
I love it! Extremely well written, great work
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- PsoBloke (John)
Check out Everything Sucks to find out why they rock so hard.
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My god how scarred we are, to feel so little in somebody's arms.
"with worn and stress galore" -- izz like, in the present tense, but the word worn is in the past tense, so i had to stop for a sec and make sense of it. -- little things like that.
but izz got alot of potential!
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The Moving Finger writes, and, having writ,
Moves on; nor all your Piety nor Wit
Shall lure it back to cancel half a Line,
Nor all your Tears blot out a Word of it.
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~*Dana*~
Anthony and Dana--December 1, 2007
"I'll stop the world and melt with you"
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~*Dana*~
Anthony and Dana--December 1, 2007
"I'll stop the world and melt with you"
and you can use "worn" in the present tense....you can say "it is worn"...so..i dont know, to me it sounds correct..but i dont know...maybe it is wrong. i dont know...to me it sounds right, but maybe i'm just reading it weird in my head.
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~*Dana*~
Anthony and Dana--December 1, 2007
"I'll stop the world and melt with you"
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~*Dana*~
Anthony and Dana--December 1, 2007
"I'll stop the world and melt with you"
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