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Pain clutches my heart in a painful clasp.
Wrenching and twisting, I can't help but gasp.
Pulling and tearing, it's ripping me apart,
Why is all this torture put on my bruised heart?

It's just an innocent bystander,
A simple pedestrian taking a gander
[at the scenery]

A vast landscape, spreading before me,
Feeling the distance rip right through me.
Can't take the space between us,
This just isnt' fair to us....
[this hurts]

It all makes me feel so alone,
Shivering, and chilled to the bone.
Straining for air in this humid box,
Can't seem to get my mouth to unlock
[to release the screams]
©2005-2010 ~JustAnEmptySoul
:iconjustanemptysoul:

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not sure where this came from.....i just wrote this, and i have no idea where i got the thought of this. but anyway, yeah....could be about when Rick leaves and me not wanting him to....anyway, read and enjoy.

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:iconvalkvick:
Very nice and vivid. And rather accurate I would say...I can sort of relate, or at least soon I will be able to. :( Excellent work, definitely :+fav:

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"A prayer for the wild at heart kept in cages."
~Tennessee Williams
:iconjustanemptysoul:
aww, i'm sorry you have to relate. :hug: but thanks for the comment.

--
~*Dana*~

Anthony and Dana--December 1, 2007
"I'll stop the world and melt with you"
:iconinvisigoth100:
gorgeous icon.

beautiful poetry :blackrose:

xxx

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:iconjustanemptysoul:
thank you so much. gotta love photobucket.com. i should probably write that in my author comments...but i always forget...or i forget where i got my avatars...lol. :shrugs: ah well, but thank you! :hug:

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~*Dana*~

Anthony and Dana--December 1, 2007
"I'll stop the world and melt with you"

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