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Will He Go? by ~JustAnEmptySoul:iconJustAnEmptySoul:

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I'll smile for my family,
I'll laugh for my friends,
But for the one that I could love,
Do I have to still pretend?

Can I tell him what I should?
Does he really have to know?
I just hope it doesn't come as
Such a major blow.

Will it make a difference?
Would we be alright?
I just hope and pray
That it doesn't cause a fight.

I cant' leave him in the dark,
He has the right to know.
I just hope after I reveal my secrets,
He wont choose to go.
©2005-2010 ~JustAnEmptySoul
:iconjustanemptysoul:

Author's Comments

alright, more thoughts and whatnot. I dont know, I seem to be in a writing mood tonight.

hope you enjoy. comments please.

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~Your-Canadian-Angel Oct 3, 2005, 6:54:50 PM
something we all ask ourselves in relationships. i can't really say much on relationships but i hope your questions get answered. Great poem. *favs*

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:heart::rose:Far longer than forever, I'll hold you in my heart.:rose::heart:

:heart::blackrose:This Ring, The Symbol Of My Oath, Will Hold Me To The Words I Speak: All I Refuse And Thee I Chuse:heart::blackrose:
:iconpsobloke:
~psobloke Oct 4, 2005, 5:20:16 AM
:hug:

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- PsoBloke (John)
Check out Everything Sucks to find out why they rock so hard.
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~blissfllEy3 Oct 4, 2005, 5:32:46 AM
o my dear lord... these are like.. my EXACT thoughts... amazing.. i absolutly love it.... it is soooo my newest :+fav: .. awesome job
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~SparklyCherry Oct 4, 2005, 7:56:11 AM
Thas a great lil poem <3 its a bit crap when you feel like that isnt it? xd

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My god how scarred we are, to feel so little in somebody's arms.
:iconspamuel:
=Spamuel Oct 4, 2005, 1:46:27 PM
wow this is great! i really like this, izz full of emotion, and once again the rhythm is spot on! :D

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The Moving Finger writes, and, having writ,
Moves on; nor all your Piety nor Wit
Shall lure it back to cancel half a Line,
Nor all your Tears blot out a Word of it.
:iconjustanemptysoul:
~JustAnEmptySoul Oct 4, 2005, 2:01:33 PM
thanks. i do have one question in particular, but nothing really i can ask out-loud right now. it sucks. blah. but i hope it gets answered soon.

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~*Dana*~

Anthony and Dana--December 1, 2007
"I'll stop the world and melt with you"
:iconjustanemptysoul:
~JustAnEmptySoul Oct 4, 2005, 2:03:53 PM
awww, i'm glad you liked it. thanks for the fave! :)

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~*Dana*~

Anthony and Dana--December 1, 2007
"I'll stop the world and melt with you"
:iconjustanemptysoul:
~JustAnEmptySoul Oct 4, 2005, 2:05:20 PM
yesh, it is....blah. but thanks for the comment. i'm glad you thought it was nice.

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~*Dana*~

Anthony and Dana--December 1, 2007
"I'll stop the world and melt with you"
:iconjustanemptysoul:
~JustAnEmptySoul Oct 4, 2005, 2:07:35 PM
:) heh...thanks. i am really into music, and been in my school's band since like...4th grade (that's um...7 or so years)...guess rhythm just rubbed off on me, lol. ;)

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~*Dana*~

Anthony and Dana--December 1, 2007
"I'll stop the world and melt with you"
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